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Christopher Sworen's avatar

Maybe I'm wrong but those guys seem kinda shifty. I think something's up. Hmm... I'll be watching them!

Parker McCoy's avatar

Rubby isn’t the best and he’s not the worst. I could watch Yowder fall off a cliff and laugh. And point.

Jason L. Queen's avatar

I'm in. Can't wait to keep reading. Well done!

Sharron Bassano's avatar

That's quite a flim-flam Rubby's got going on. I hope there is a part 2!?👍🏻❤️

Parker McCoy's avatar

Hehe. He’s a flim-flammy kind of guy. No, but there is more Rubby to come and Fairfax and Glew will be involved next time…

K.C. Knouse's avatar

Pretty slick scam Ruddy has going there. Where are Fairfax and Glew? I know those Circle K's. There is one in our neighborhood. Can't wait to see what happens next, Parker.

Parker McCoy's avatar

Yeah, Rubby went to high school with Glew and I’ll just say that he has a bit of a soft spot for Glew and he’s not ALL bad. He’s definitely not All good either. Hehe. But in-between characters can be interesting. Yeah, Circle Ks are usually kind of seedy. Hehe. Thank you so much for reading and your continued support, KC.

Steve Elliott's avatar

That's a pretty slick twist. Neat!

Parker McCoy's avatar

Hehe. Why, thank you, Steve. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading.

Jessica Newton's avatar

That was great!!! Rubby is definitely icy in her ways. Definitely didn’t see that coming, it was excellent. Great job as always.

Parker McCoy's avatar

Thank you so much. Yes, ol’ Rubby’s a crafty one. Hehe. Thank you for reading and your continued support. I couldn’t do it without you.

Ricky Champagne's avatar

Rubby is a cold operator. Did not see that coming. Always love your descriptions. "sky blue jacket and mittens the color of an early morning lawn, perhaps a church yard." Nicely done.

Parker McCoy's avatar

Hehe. Thank you so much, Ricky. I try to size up a character with few, but telling, details. I think most of us remember one or two key things about a person. But I do admire those who can pile on telling details, too. Thank you so much for reading.